This is a good start, but something suspicious here: such long spans and so very little in terms of a structural logic. The spatial logic meanwhile seems a bit too neat, a bit too open and porous and of the same scale. if you can use a light grey wire line drawing of the back ground geometry in each space that will help give us a sense of volume for the section. you can do this by creating a hidden line drawing of the section then import into illustrator. if you don't know what i mean, there's a really nice section on my website labdora.com that Susanna Mickenny did for the competition of the Seroussi pavilion. really try and make the section somthing substantial, ok? think of the line drawing of the plan and how you can embedd that in the section.
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This is a good start, but something suspicious here: such long spans and so very little in terms of a structural logic. The spatial logic meanwhile seems a bit too neat, a bit too open and porous and of the same scale. if you can use a light grey wire line drawing of the back ground geometry in each space that will help give us a sense of volume for the section. you can do this by creating a hidden line drawing of the section then import into illustrator. if you don't know what i mean, there's a really nice section on my website labdora.com that Susanna Mickenny did for the competition of the Seroussi pavilion. really try and make the section somthing substantial, ok? think of the line drawing of the plan and how you can embedd that in the section.
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